I can see how having your voice for a flash would be a good idea. I mainly liked the voices towards the end. For a bit of constructive criticism; I don't know a whole lot about voice recording, but some of the recording sounded like you might've been too close to the mic. Like when you use your "p"s and "b"s or breath into the mic. Again, I'm no expert, so that's just what I think.
Anyways, good demo man. If I were a decent flash artist, I'd definitely want your voice. ;)
i think this was very succesful for a first demo. I bought a pop filter to cut down on the p's and b's. I just gotta get alot better at the voices :D
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