Toplin's Reviews

[Jasper's Big Day]

Sexy

I wish you would spit your needles out and wear me like a hat.

NoodleCreme responds:

Well that's good to know I guess...

[How 2 Make a Ngs Username]

Funny Idea

I like how you decided to make a flash about something like this. Very funny.
It's true that's how most of the names go around here, but I gotta say it's better than people's names on Xbox. Like "xXXxfall3nxxxxanglxxxxsnip3rXXx" ugh...

lol anyways, good stuff man.

[The Year of the Cat]

Marc.!

Enter my body! Splash your hot greatness all over my face!

Everything you do is perfect.

[OH F**K, I'm Late!]

53 seconds. I took a leisurely stroll.

Very simple/fun idea. It certainly was challenging when I was trying to get a good time. But I kept stopping to look at what it was I was trying to avoid. Some of the models made me laugh. Very bizarre lol.

Good stuff man, you certainly got some programming skills that need to be put to more work. :)

Sterance responds:

They will be put to use shortly with the next version of this game; it will have more unseen art by Flee as well.

[Skill Test]

Nicely Done.

As far as programing your flash game, it was spot on and impressive. Short and to the point. I liked the idea of a reaction skills game. Well done.

I think I did decently with...
Final Score: 310.546
Result: Above Average

[Line Simulator]

Awesome!

I loved it! It was difficult without being impossible.

Like everyone else, it was the emo kid that gave me the most trouble. But eventually I started just trying anything and HA! I did it lol.

Very fun overall. Liked the humor in each encounter. Hope to see more from you!

[Pj's 1st Crappy Demo]

Very nice,

I can see how having your voice for a flash would be a good idea. I mainly liked the voices towards the end. For a bit of constructive criticism; I don't know a whole lot about voice recording, but some of the recording sounded like you might've been too close to the mic. Like when you use your "p"s and "b"s or breath into the mic. Again, I'm no expert, so that's just what I think.

Anyways, good demo man. If I were a decent flash artist, I'd definitely want your voice. ;)

PJ-Olzow responds:

i think this was very succesful for a first demo. I bought a pop filter to cut down on the p's and b's. I just gotta get alot better at the voices :D